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You, being carried in Italy's arms while he follows Germany, were beginning to see a complete change of the environment around you. The walls that are usually gray, cracked, and leaking in sea water, are becoming more mended and cleaner. The tiled floors were waxed, ripped red curtains are sewn back together, and even the steel doors are becoming less dented than before.

What was going on? Half of Rapture is in ruins while this half seems to be fixing itself. You and your protectors have been trying to figure out how to get out of this little maze of hallways. After you three pass through a doorway, another hall awaits on the other side.

" This is getting ridicules." Germany grumbled while looking left and right.

" Ve. I would like us to get out of here. There is too many turns." Italy said while catching his breath.

Suddenly you three heard stomping. With every 'stomp' it felt as though the ground shook. It was coming from behind.

" W-what is that, Germany?" Italy said while hugging you a little more tightly.

Germany squinted his blue eyes trying to focus on what was approaching down the long hallway. He recognized what it was. It was another one of those giant metal creatures. Yet this one looks different. It wasn't hunched over like the first, this creature's figure was more straight and robust. Not to mention it looks like it had two grenade launchers clinging on both shoulders.

" Uh…let's keep moving." The German said. Unfortunately another metal giant with the same look and launchers was stomping down the hall in front of you three.  Trapped right in the middle. Staring at one or the other. They seemed to be staring straight at you.

Their  six yellow glass eyes on their helmets quickly turned crimson red, then they charged. Germany released his electro bolt energy at the one that was in front while Italy snapped fireballs to the one behind. They were not slowing down.

The one that was running towards Italy, shot out not grenades but missiles.

" Germany! Get down!!" He shouted. You held tightly to the Italian and closed your eyes.

(BA-BOOOOM!!!)

The wall on the left side had a big gaping hole in it. The missiles must of curved. Germany pulled Italy up and you three ran through the hole. You could hear the two 'Big Daddy's' rampaging right behind you.

" Gyaaaa!! Germanyyyyy!!!"

" Just keep running Italy!!!"
Sorry for making this chapter short, but I was working on something else. Anyway someone gave me a little criticism about my writing so I'll try to make the story more interesting. ^^! Anyway enjoy.



Hetalia and Bioshock 2 does not belong to me.

Chapter Six:[link]
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:icondarkecila:
DarkEcila Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
AHHHHH! RUN!
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:iconjosie900:
josie900 Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
FASTER!
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:icondarkecila:
DarkEcila Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh
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:iconseerofheros:
seerofheros Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Is that one Rosie?
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:iconjosie900:
josie900 Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I believe so. Rosies and Rumblers are similar.
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:iconglaceon007:
glaceon007 Dec 31, 2012  Student General Artist
Keep running you too! Oh this is getting good~!
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:iconjosie900:
josie900 Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankyou
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:iconbattlebrothertherix:
battlebrothertherix Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm...it just doesn't feel right that two Docile-mode Big Daddies would just attack each other...

On another note, a fun tactic of mine is when the Big Sister comes, I put a Big Daddy between her and I, let her shoot at him, and let him deal with her :P
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josie900 Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
By the way who's your favorite sonic character?
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:iconbattlebrothertherix:
battlebrothertherix Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Tails/Miles. Though, keep in mind I mean the darker version of him, when he's older and a lot cooler in my eyes. Then Miles from Moebius, because the way I write him is just as cool as Tails.

I've got a Sonic story going if you'd like to read it; I can link you to the first part if you want.
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